Prompted: Choices, Choices — Long way down

Get your writin' on.
Get your writin’ on. Word Count: 495

Yuu jumped to another grated walkway a floor below. Ill-prepared, she landed hard and cursed as her knees collided with metal. Hissing, she leaned forward against the pain from her knees and ribcage. Memories of her bedpost and a long deafening moment when the world stopped filtered through a haze. Nearby a brick from the government housing structure–converted to house “unattended” children–fell and ricocheted off a sculpture. No sirens blared, there was only the faint popping of weapons fire.

Boom! Squealing, Yuu gripped the railing while the world shook. A shrieker they called it, a provider of semi-controlled destruction. Bits of brick and other debris pelted her small frame, coating her long hair. When the shrieker finished , Yuu was on her feet again. She had little time. If they got closer…

Yuu stopped short upon arriving at the worst of the damage. The entire wall had been blown in, leaving only piles of rubble far below, along with twisted metal, shards of glass… and no way down. Her small fingers wrapped around the edge as she peered down to the next walkway.

“Please! Help us!” a small voice squeaked from above. “Please–we can’t get down.”

Yuu craned her head upwards, narrowing her eyes to see through the darkness and dust that still hovered in the air. Two small children peered down from the walkway–well partial walkway–above. She estimated the  boy to be around seven or eight; the girl was no more than five. The walkway she was on might hold them. Sucking at her bottom lip, she eyed the supports–would they hold?

“One at a time,” she called up. “Your sister first–lower her to me.” The girl resisted, and her struggles caused the walkway above to slant. “Careful!” Yuu shouted before saying softer: “I’ll catch you. I promise!”

The girl slipped, rather than jumped, but Yuu caught her; the connectors, tying her walkway to wall, moaned. The boy hesitated; his large eyes, moist from tears, looked to her and all her 14 years of experience for guidance. Above his walkway groaned, its downward angle more pronounced. He needed to jump, but he could take out their walkway. If he remained above, there was still a chance that walkway would fall and hit theirs. She should drop the girl to the one below– Eee-errr-eee, a persistent groan. Not enough time, not enough… Yuu ran her hands through her hair, removing some of the dust and debris. It might miss them–the boy would be lost, but they’d survive. Eerrerree.

Yuu could hear her mother chiding her, calling her “my little monkey.” Yuu’s vision blurred while her lips quivered. Her mother had done so that day. They-they were all going to be together–why was she alone. Errerrr. It might condemn her and the girl, Yuu thought, setting the girl down before holding her hands upward.

“Jump!” she shouted. No matter what, Yuu decided, they would go together, one way or another.

 

Some come easier than others

What is in a title? Well, a lot actually. A title can either entice or turn off potential readers, and really the publishing industry’s gatekeepers, too, if you take the traditional route. There are clever titles, cryptic titles and everything in between (just check out Goodreads’ list of the best book titles to get an idea). Some titles come easy, some not so much, for a writer. Sometimes they are changed or revised. For instance, “The Great Gatsby” alone could have been called “Trimalchio in West Egg,” “Among Ash-Heaps and Millionaires,” “On the Road to West Egg,” “Under the Red, White, and Blue,” “Gold-Hatted Gatsby,” and finally “The High-Bouncing Lover.” Mentalfloss.com has provided an list of other classic books that could have made it bookshelves with different titles as well.

I have often found, just like the greats featured in the article, titles can be fickle or given to change. And as can be seen in the case with those greats, sometimes change is for the best.n After all, one title might not have the ring of another, which is why it might not be a bad idea to give any title a good test run. Say a title out loud, run it by good friends or significant others, etc. If it doesn’t work, they might even be able to play better alternatives or at least point you in the right direction–after all, a few words might trigger something in your mind.

Sometimes I struggle with titles myself. A few writing projects have had titles that just fall into place while others start with one titles and over the course of the project turn into something different–sometimes the end product bears no resemblances with the original. Currently, I find myself going through a bit of a pickle with a novel; it just doesn’t have a title screaming to be use, but perhaps the story just needs to be more completed. At least until then I  have a working title: “Heritage Lost.” It is definitely not the one and will not survive to the querying stage, but it is an improvement of scifi novel.

Are titles a challenge for anyone out there as well? What are some of the methods you have used while trying to solidify a title for your works?

Sometimes a person needs to reevaluate

Bilbo
Sometimes age just catches up with you.

Lately, I’ve found myself doing a lot of reevaluating, because I’m just not happy with where I am currently. I used to be the girl who was working of four or more writing projects at a time. Of course, if I take a step back, I’m still working on many writing projects; it’s just that the majority are work related. Between special sections, the weekly newspapers and monthly magazines, one of which I’m managing, it’s a lot to juggle, and I can see why it leaves me with writing and editing fatigue. To be quite frank, I can fully appreciate Bilbo’s statement in “The Fellowship of the Ring” when he is addressing Gandalf: “I feel thin, sort of stretched, like butter scraped over too much bread.”

No matter what, there seems too much to take care of and so little time or energy to handle them. I no longer have that teenager’s body that can stay up at odd hours of night to write without repercussions. I no longer have the large spans of free time either. However, looking back to those years can be helpful. And by reflecting on them, in addition to current practices, I can see the vast majority of my problems can be taken care of via time management, something I’ve been failing most stupendously at.

Like a lot of writers, I want my personal writing to be published. And time management is key to that ultimate goal, because writers nowadays aren’t just responsible for finishing the product but also taking on a considerable amount of marketing, which requires social media presence, website/website maintenance, networking (where I also fail stupendously…was never charmed with the popularity bone) and much more. There must be a set schedule that is completed with diligence. I understand this very well, but understanding only goes so far when it is not put into practice. I follow these principles very precisely at work, where I’m juggling multiple drop-dead deadlines, but I completely collapse upon myself at home.

It’s become a major goal of mine to stop this cycle of self-destruction, and with it the sense of self-doubt and negativity. And as part of this goal, I’ve reexamined my past to find solutions. From now on, unless I have a meeting to cover in the evening, I’m going to force myself to write or edit my work for at least an hour. Then an half hour before bed, I’m going to read (something I used to do frequently). Internet usage will have to be reshaped and retooled, because I’ve almost become addicted to certain parts of it.

Work in progress. Probably going to put my corner desk into that particular corner.
Work in progress. Probably going to put my corner desk into that particular corner.

Another boost for productivity will hopefully come from my office/library/music room, which I’m in the process of getting in order. The space will never see a TV. While I can’t completely cut off internet to the room, I hope to dog-ear it for music,writing research, querying and platform building only. The entire room is going to be tooled to be a writer’s haven by the time I’m done with it with a piano for in between breaks. There will be organization and very little clutter, or so I tell myself! For the theme, I’m going with mint and orange, a color combination I wrote about in Michiana House & Home’s May issue (Page 18) in honor of the Kentucky Derby (mint juleps, you see). After writing about it, I knew I wanted it in my office, so here I am ready to put up the second coat of mint paint and run out on the hunt for orange accents.

As the room comes together, I will be sure to share further photos and my thoughts on how it has worked from a writer’s point of view. At the end of the day, I’m hoping it will be the perfect writer’s retreat where I can focus and get work done without distractions. A space that includes neat accent pieces that can be used for story-boarding and organization of the ol’ paper trail, plus a small floor sitting area for reading or writing with the old pen and paper.

Cheers, everyone!

Going mint and orange. That lampshade was the first orange accent piece. Got it at Dollar General for $2.
Going mint and orange. That lampshade was the first orange accent piece. Got it at Dollar General for $2.

 

Fiction in Motion: Even the Best Intentions — Part I

Alleyway

 

“Come-along, come-along down to the courtyard; Come-along back where it all began,” a deep baritone voice bounced off the narrow alleyway’s brick walls. But the man, hands deep into his coat’s pockets, was barely registrable over the ruckus from the crowded establishments of Cod Row. It was a seedy district, particularly at night it would seem, but perfect for those who wanted to forget or not be remembered. “Back where they strung up the bard; After all, some truths can never be spoke. Shush now, shush now, don’t fret, my dear; Come-along back where it all began, dear; Words are dangerous things but have no fear; Some truths must be–”

He ceased his song as feet displaced the wet stones behind him. Shink! A sharp object pierced his coat, just to his skin before it stopped. Ah, so this is personal, Alvar thought. Looking out the corner of his eye, there was nothing to go on; his “friend” remained shrouded in darkness just out of his peripheral vision. He didn’t speak. No, it wasn’t his turn, and he was never one to give into the whims of people who would put a knife in his back. They were usually jumpy, too–and he only seemed to provoke.

“Dreary horse piss that,” the voice of an old acquaintance said. The man then spat off to the side. “How you been, Alvar? Gotta say, I’m surprised you aren’t strung up yourself after Aldonske.”

Ah… “Small miracles, Villi.” Alvar smirked. “Made it through the net, you know.”

“You’re so good at that, ain’t that right?” The sharp point broke skin. “Just wriggle, wriggle, and land on your feet like a damn cat. Always landin’ on your damn feet.” Villi stepped closer and clapped his hand on Alvar’s shoulder rather hard. “But gotta give credit, where credit’s due. You are a hard worm to find. And it’s impressive for you: You’re a walkin’ disaster.”

Alvar tilted his head toward the fingers that had ensnared his shoulder like a vise, and as he did so, he could feel Villi’s breath against his skin. You’ve made it too personal, he mused. So many mistakes. Clearing his throat, Alvar said, “I’ve given up that life, completely cut ties. I’m making amends–”

Villi’s cackling interrupted him. “This–this is too rich. You, you of all people-”

“Why do people always have that reaction?” Alvar shifted his weight; it went unnoticed. “I am trying. No accidental deaths, no starting unattended fires, no mayhem–no, just helping out here and there, all sorts of odd jobs. But sometimes–” his frame tensed in preparation. “Unfortunate things just happen around me.”

His elbow shot backwards, nailing Villi high in the ribs. He spun. Distance separated him from the knife and also allowed him to land a punch to the smaller man’s face. Villi staggered, knife still clenched in his hand. The word bastard barely registered with Alvar as he moved. Have to keep him off-balance. It was a mantra ringing in his head. Villi was fast; he used his small stature to his advantage. The knife came close to Alvar’s throat, but he contorted his body to avoid it and ended up swinging around Villi. He kicked hard, sending his attacker into a brick wall.

“You are dead, Alvar–a dead man!” He threw rocks at him before launching himself at Alvar. “All those years in Dersco… all I could think was watching the blood drain from your face!”

Alvar dodged the sloppy move. “Then you should have stabbed me in the back rather than let your emotions get the best of you.” Grabbing Villi’s arm as the man came at him again, Alvar slammed him into the ground, coming down heavy on the man’s back to bar any further resistance. The knife had clattered to the ground at some point during the struggle. “I’m not eager to die; I wasn’t just going to stand there for the Sisters’ sakes!” He ground his knee into Villi’s back. “Five years in Dersco isn’t enough to lose your mind. And you being there, really wasn’t my problem. You made your own mess, and you paid for it. Move on, leave me alone and li–”

A gurgling sound emitted below him, a very familiar sound… “Shit.” Alvar stood immediately and rolled Villi onto his back. The knife dislodged from where his sternum ended, the fabric in the area of wound darkening visibly despite the absence of light. His would-be killer just gurgled; there really was nothing else he could do as the blood pooled inside him. The knife had gone in deep. How had it gone in that deep? Alvar truly had the worst of luck. The gurgling quieted as Alvar tried to stem the flow of blood using his already ruined coat. And now he had a corpse.

Throwing his blood soaked coat against the wall, Alvar began to pace. His arms were trembling. Always trembling. Aldonske had really ruined him, just as the Schattern had said. He could just walk away, the city guards would never find him. No, he was still too good for that to happen, and city guards were usually pathetic at best. He looked down at Villi. They had never been friends, just means to an end– not to this end. They had never–or at least he hadn’t–saw this end coming. Clenching his eyes shut, Alvar forced himself to stop all movement, except the trembling, nothing could stop that. Blue eyes sprang to his mind, judging him up to the very moment he had stopped them. He banished the thought.

Instead, routes, which he had memorized upon his arrival to Kairolski, vividly appeared behind his closed eyelids, all leading to one point. He retrieved his coat and draped it over and behind Villi’s head before he lifted the very still form. It wouldn’t be long–about three to four hours–before he would go stiff. Gotta hurry, Alvar decided beginning on one of the routes, carrying Villi as one might drag home a drunken friend. He would see he got a decent burial. He started down the alleyway, becoming fully encased by the darkness. It would more than likely come back to bite him–it always did.

Copyright Sarah Wright, 2014

Introducing “Fiction in Motion”

I’m going to try out something new on Blood & Ink, namely something I’m calling “Fiction in Motion.” It is just like those short writing session you would get in high school every so many weeks, where without preparation or much planning you just dive into a story and let it take you where it will. Some results are good, others not so much–but in the end it doesn’t matter because at least you are writing and improving your craft.

And that is what I will be doing on a hopefully bi-weekly schedule. I will be writing short stories without any real pre-planning: I will be winging it as it  were. Some of the shorts will have continuations, some will standalone. They will hopefully be enjoyable reads. The first one will be dropping within a few minutes.

Cheers everyone! -S.W.

Book Review: Ender’s Game

A fast read
Card spins an interesting take on an alternative Earth that in the end holds a mirror to humanity; the reflection not entirely flattering, but perhaps very accurate.

A long, long time ago in a not so distant galaxy, I was a very avid reader. I would constantly have a book in hand, whether fiction or nonfiction. However, at some point in my adult life I drifted away. Looking back it might have been the binge reading required texts in college, or maybe it was my busy schedule since started at my current career — who knows. But recently, I’ve made the conscious decision to reverse this tide: Writers have to read after all. In particular, I decided to read more SciFi novels, starting first with the classic “Ender’s Game” by Orson Scott Card.

I hadn’t seen the recently released film version, nor did I actual know much about “Ender’s Game” beyond the hype of the movie. But while browsing through the selection of SciFi and Fantasy novels at my local library, I decided to give it a chance. And I can’t say I was disappointed, albeit I did have some frustrations with the book.

Enter the Review

Card is a talented, easy-to-read writer, and the book just flowed for me, leading to long evenings spent reading the alternative Earth he had envisioned. For the most part, I enjoyed his characters, or at least Ender and some of his fellow students at the Battle School, particularly Bean, Dink and Alai — even though at times I could not relate to them or found myself straining to maintain my suspension of disbelief. Why? Very few of the children characters ever struck me as being children, particularly Ender and his siblings, Valentine and Peter. Now I know they are supposed to be super geniuses — and of course Ender is in a military environment — but I still expected some immaturity with all the children characters, with them being characters that could grow. But instead, Ender’s perfection is constantly mentioned; but what would one expect? After all, he is “all they’ve got”: humanity’s one shot.

Ender does have great moments when he feels real: he does cry, he gets a little homesick, knows fear and even suffers a mental breakdown as the adults heap all their problems on him and expect him to dig humanity out of its hole. You do feel sorry for this kid, once you are reminded of his age and watch as he is manipulated into becoming what he most fears. It’s only understandable that over the course of the novel, you do develop a distaste for all the adults in the book as they take extremes to shape Ender — ultimately leading to the big trick of the book, which led to an “oh really” moment for me (your mileage may vary on the big reveal). In fact the appalling nature of the adults made me speculate that the buggers were not nearly as bad as they were being made out to be, leading me wish at points that they would revisit Earth with vengeance — occasionally in SciFi, humanity just needs put into its place.

There were other instances where I was pulled from the action (besides when struck by the almost alien nature of the Wiggin children). One instance was the rule limiting parents to two children each. Yes, I get that overpopulation is an issue in this alternate version of Earth; however, humanity has been living under the threat of the buggers. You would think procreation would be encouraged in order to have plenty of future soldiers to serve as canon fodder against an enemy that in the past has been shown to be quite deadly. Who knows, amongst those unborn children might have been more Eisenhowers, Napoleons, Shermans, Alexanders, Lees, Rommels — Ender Wiggins need not have been the only one, which is another small nitpick I had. Yes, geniuses can be rare, but throughout the history of the world, there have been cases of  several great generals, sometimes all within the same conflict. And with Card’s Earth being chalked full of people (overpopulation is a problem after all), I find it hard to believe that there are no other military geniuses that appeared throughout the long pause in the bugger conflict. It just seems statistically impossible.

Another “what?” moment was more something that I found hilarious, though I know it was definitely not the intention of the author: The boys are constantly naked throughout the book; yes, cue the immature giggles. This was just a minor aspect that rather than add to the story, kinda interrupts its flow for me — another probably others who have weirdly triggered funny bones like my own. This choice on Card’s part also leads to some rather homoerotic moments, which are also unintentionally funny when you look at the author’s thoughts on the topic.

Ender’s actions, which don’t always follow his thoughts of “not playing the game,” not giving into the adults, was perhaps my biggest peeve. At first, I was expecting Card to have Ender rally the other kids around him — like a true general — to combat the unfair “no-rules” approach of the adults (albeit still turning out to be what the adults wanted), but it never materialized. The set up was there, but despite his constant thoughts about not playing the game, Ender still goes along and plays the game, but because he is still winning he arrives at the conclusion that he’s resisting the adults — kinda counterproductive in my opinion, but what ever floats your boat. Yep, this one is definitely my biggest peeves about “Ender’s Game,” he never uses his massive intellect and growing power with his peers to take a stand against the adults and their constant changing of the rules.

There were other minor issues, largely tied with the twist toward the end — but I won’t spoil that for those who have not read or seen the film. However, I found Card’s handling of the buggers to be refreshing, and through it, he offers a very telling portrait of humanity. However, Card doesn’t just end the book looking at the mirror darkly. No, he provides a glimmer of hope for our severely flawed species.

Final Thoughts: I would recommend reading “Ender’s Game” despite its flaws and minor annoyances; there is, after all, a reason that over the years it has remained a classic of the SciFi genre. And just being over 200 pages in length, you will tear through it quickly. Now that I’ve completed the book, I think I will check out the film just to see how they handled it, especially with the time gaps. Will I read other books in the “Ender’s Game” series? Quite possibly, at least its indirect sequel, “Speaker for the Dead.”

I’m in need of great SciFi novels to read and am looking for any suggestions. In particular, I would like tales set in space, preferably without Earth. Leave suggestions in the comments. Thanks — S.W.

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Three bloody quills out of four: A quick, fun read

App Review: Kindle Buffet

As writers, we love to read. And like most creative types, we are often poor. So what better than a smorgasbord of free Kindle ebooks? This is where Kindle Buffet — available on both Google Play and iTunes — comes in handy by providing you with your daily menu of free Kindle books. While you can Google or hunt for free ebooks via a variety of different sources, Kindle Buffet cuts down on the time spent in the act by pulling up the cream of the crop as it were.

I first learned of this app from my frugal friend who has a Kindle and of course had to have it. Fortunately, I was able to download the app for my Android phone, and over the course of using the app, I’ve found several fascinating books from cookbooks and nonfiction to fantasy novels. And the big plus? Well, if you end up not liking something, there is no reason to fret: You are only out the time, not the money.

When you launch the app, you are greet by the Editor’s Choice. This page features approximately eight editor picks, plus a couple of top bargains for the day. These picks often feature a wide variety from romance and thriller to politics, though I’ve notice a tendency to lean more toward the romance. With each book entry on the Editor’s Choice page, you are told the genre of the book, plus provided a summary and a brief bio for the author.

On the same page is the Bargains for Today section, which features ebooks that have had a huge cut in price. For example, “Unbreakable: My Story, My Way” by the late Jenni Rivera normally sells for $9.99 but today is only $1.99 — not bad, right? Of course, both the Bargains of the Today and the Editor’s Choice update daily, so each day there will be something new to discover, which is always nice.

However, if nothing on the Editor’s Choice catches your fancy, that’s alright! Just hit the Fiction Top Sellers tab and select from whatever genre will satisfy your reading needs, or just select the Top Free Fiction titles. Once you select what you are looking for, you will be directed to the Amazon website itself to free eBooks of your chosen genre. You can do the exact same thing with nonfiction titles with genres like: cooking, food and wine; advice & how-to; children’s nonfiction; and so on.

Beyond books, this app also highlights free apps that are available through Amazon. If you have an Android, Kindle Buffet will also highlight general free apps.

Now you might be wondering, how come these books are discounted or free. Well often, the author or publisher choose to do so, more often than not to gain exposure. According to Weber Books, the maker of the app, these giveaways can be used to spark additional sales of an author’s previous books. Of course, they also note: “Kindle freebies are a hotly debated topic among authors. Many believe that the giveaways devalue all books, making it harder for each author to earn a living. They argue that readers will buy far fewer books if the market is flooded with freebies. However, perhaps an equal number of authors — including many highly successful ones — believe that the giveaways provide invaluable exposure, enabling them to broaden their fan base and ultimately sell more books.”

No matter what your viewpoint is on ebooks or freebies, Kindle Buffet is a fun app for the average user and holds the possibility of introducing a reader to a new favorite author or book. So happy reading!

 

Not quite as planned

The joys of camping out all April.
The joys of camping out all April.

Well, I didn’t meet my word goal for Camp NaNoWriMo in April, but I figure having more than 18,000 words is worth it. Plus compared to previous NaNoWriMo experiences, this one came closest to that first epic year, which is in itself a major accomplishment. I don’t know where to pinpoint it, but somewhere over the course of my adventures in NaNoWrimos, JulNoWriMos, NaNoEdMos and so on I lost the thrill, drive and joy of participating in such events.

This year I didn’t share with anyone that I was participating in April’s Camp — at least not until the month was halfway through. It was just me and my writing, a place I’ve been trying to get back to since about 2010-11. This approached worked, I was able to enjoy the experience removed from feelings of failure or being left out (it’s amazing what avoiding social media can do for a person disposition!). And despite not completing my 35,000 word goal, I feel accomplished.

My SciFi novel now has a working title, “Heritage Lost,” and is at the halfway point (10 chapters of 20 chapters done). Additionally, along the journey, I made several realizations that will no doubt make revision work interesting, but in the long run will make for a better novel. The experience also sparked a return to writing normalcy that I haven’t had since college and high school, where I’m practically writing everyday again… well, besides work.

Now that the month is complete, I will begin posting regularly again. I have some writing articled planned, in addition to an app review. Also, I will be working on building my creative writing portfolio and resume throughout May and June by completing several short stories for submission. Of course, I still have a lot of work on the SciFi novel to complete, so that will continue to be a work in progress. I also need to get back on top of submissions of “Passage,” which I’m also toying with the idea of publishing on Kindle. Has anyone had any experiences with going that route? If yes, please message me or comment in the comment section.

So how was your Camp NaNoWriMo experience this past month? Even if you didn’t win, I’m hoping you learned something of value about your novel and yourself through the experience, in addition to cranking out some words that you might not have gotten otherwise. As for July, is anyone taking that Camp on? I still haven’t decided on that matter.

Writing Prompt #8: Change of perspective

It is amazing what a simple shift in point of view can do to a scene, whether it is giving the POV to a new character who is also in the scene or it is implementing a complete narrative mode switch from first person to third person. This prompt requires you to pick a scene or short story that you have wrote and look it at it from another perspective. Pick a different character or narrative mode to tell the same scene or story. It should read drastically different, especially if you switch to another character, because every character is going to have a unique way of acting and thinking.

By the end of the prompt, you should have a deeper appreciation for the inner workings of that scene and possibly another character.

The road not traveled

“Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,

And sorry I could not travel both

And be one traveler, long I stood

And looked down one as far as I could

To where it bent in the undergrowth…”

-Robert Frost

There is always something intriguing about the road not traveled. And as writers, we often leave a lot of roads uncovered, unexplored as we plot and piece together our novels or short stories. Why does a plot bunny dive down one hole and not the other? It is an intriguing question, and I have always found it fascinating when author’s reveal some of their reasoning for how their novel arrived to print as it is — or even more tantalizing, how it might have been.

Marriage counseling? Just maybe.
Marriage counseling? Just maybe.

J.K. Rowling is one of those authors who gives some insight into her works, including the roads not taken. Back in February, she had dropped a bombshell to shippers throughout the Harry Potter fandom when she stated that Hermione might actually have been happier with Harry rather than with Ron, her cannon husband. Fans of HermionexRon took up arms with many stating Rowling should keep her mouth shut. With their pants in a bunch, they fail to see that HermionexRon is cannon: It is in print and it isn’t going anywhere. However, for those who are not so tied to pairings, it was a window into “what if.” Rowling has also revealed several other possibilities in the past, including the originally planned death of Arthur Weasley.

I am a huge fan of AUs, or alternative universes, so when a writer shares potential divergent roads, I don’t mind it; in fact, I welcome such insight into their writing process from the horse’s mouth as it were. Often AUs come in the shape of fan-written fanfics, where fans highlight areas within a work, whether it be a novel, TV series or film, that could have had other outcomes. There are hundreds of these types of works, from Hermione ending up with Draco to Star Wars character Anakin Skywalker not falling to the dark side. While these are fun reads, they don’t quite have the draw as when a creator drops little tidbits.

Looking at my own works, I seldom consider my own uncovered rabbit holes. In fact, I rarely imagine my tales being any different; but then again, when I actually look at my writing process, it is filled with constant changes and revisions. Actions change, characters evolve… truly the writing process is a fascinating one, filled with twists and turns. However, on the whole, I do not usually pause to look down a road until it bends into the undergrowth. But I have wondered, what twisty avenues fanficers would take my works should I every publish. At first I could not think of any divergent trails, because “how it is suppose to be” remained firmly rooted in mind. But as I continued to look, I could see little trails the rabbit could have sprung down for better or for worse.

What would have happened if instead of returning home as a child, my one main character had remained at a temple as a clergy member? With the action already set to occur no matter what, what would have been the consequences of his new role? It is fun to consider these possibilities and their potential outcomes; however, I do not let them distract me from the reality of the novel. Things are set and unlikely to change, especially not to that extreme — just like Rowling isn’t about to change her works to make HermionexHarry reign supreme.

So what trails have you passed over in your own works? It is surely worth a look if only for the fun of it.